In camera Editing

The task was to record a video without having the help of editing, we got into groups and was given a scenario and thought about what shots we're going to use in this scene. Our scene was Alex flirting with a girl. What I like about this video are the setting that we chose to film in which helped the scene looked more real and natural and the variety of shots used in this video like the point-of-view, close-ups, long shots and extreme close-ups that help the viewers understand what’s happening, I think the best scene was a scene of Alex on the phone because it was a good camera shot and it looked natural on how he acted. Although, some scenes are too long and should have been shorter like the scene were Christina was talking to me, it should of only lasted 5 seconds at least. Also the camera was too shaky and we should of used the tripod to make it look better. If I could edit the video, I would make some scenes shorter to keep it interesting also add text in the beginning so everyone knows what this video is about and add some background music to make it more appealing to everyone.